That's probably the best with the way you were trying to go... Its just it doesn't mix well with Bach. At all. Its alright still.
Thank you for your comment first of all.
Actually, I made this song in music class and we had to make the 'most creative' music we could using bach, so it shouldn't really mix you see....
A classic song's remix does not have to be classic remember!
Its pretty good before the baseline comes in. Then it just falls apart and sounds really, really, childish. You should also find another keyboard tone at 0:28 Its just painfully bad. If I were you I'd scratch everything after that and and start anew.
But otherwise good intro to your intro.
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